Showing posts with label check your sentences. Show all posts
Showing posts with label check your sentences. Show all posts

Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Sins that slide past the copy desk unobserved

I used to work at a copy desk. At Variety, where I worked for a time, it was a huge table around which all the copy editors sat.

Articles were passed around the table, giving everyone a chance to note anything wrong and fix it. That was our job. Kinda fun if you like to play with words. (And I do.) But the greatest sin a copy editor can make is allowing a mistake to get past her -- and that often means past all the copywriters. Tch. Not good.

Which brings me to a sentence I saw this morning on AP's page at the New York Times. Here it is:
Hungarian Jewish leaders say they have found 103 Torah scrolls taken from Hungary during the Holocaust in a Russian library.
Ahem. The Holocaust didn't happen in a Russian library. Not now, not ever. It's simple to fix a flaw like this. Here's one way they could have handled it. 
In a Russian library, Hungarian Jewish leaders found 103 Torah scrolls taken from Hungary during the Holocaust.
See how easy that was? I swear, copy desks have fallen on hard times. I guess since no one reads anymore, simple copy fixes are out of their reach. Pity.